How about tour?the industrial tour,
well.....engg. students love it to the core,
to spend quality time with the one's they adore,
we've decided it off so why's the delay any more?
huh.!its not that easy,but thanks to the active four!
no one would ever know how much responsobility they bore.
although permissions,travels n payments for tour opened the door!
Here we go!guys n gals all together,
moving away from our routines to take a breather,
where did we lead to tour?east or west,
oh sorry we r the ECE who prefer the best,
while the masses preffered north with a very wide mouth,
we rather chose the lesstrodden sceneric south!
Train journey rocks,had a lovely time with songs n fun,
our excitement and noise left the passengers stun,
what was more exciting was the view of watching the train run
amidst the greenary,our pleasure of watching it could never be done,
although soon came the time when we had to travel
in a bus all through kerala n parts of tamil nadu's marvel!
Kodaikanal,the beautiful freezy hill station,
looking at it i fell into an infactuation,
rarest trees,serene weather n romantic spots,
made us take lots of photos of our thoughts,
all guys were excited and were on a very high,
that was when a spoilsport was smashed by a guy,
the reason being he oversmartly showed the local his thigh,
thanks for it which makes us laugh,but him cry!
It was the time to move on to the next spot,
the place was kanyakumari where the climate was hot,
with some lovely temples and statues amidst the sea,
also arised some problems which we dint foresee,
the reasons being small and very pityfull,
but can be expected when the foolish were handful!
we had a great time with the waters in beech,
diving from boats,but this was where the sun gave us a ditch!
The next was kovalam,the most awaited,
with our adrenalines high,all were just excited,
the waves here were very mighty and raised about 10 feet high,
the site which stunned us all n gals respond oh my..!
the best part of it was we getting a leap over that wave,
wow! let me tell u,nothing in my life would ever be that suave,
as usual the frightened gals just sat on the shore,
looking at the guys enjoying to their core!
How could we ever forget gals here getting too childish,
although accepted becos they had guts to do only that rubbish,
standing at corners with hands together playing ringa ringa roses,
guys broke into laughter,when waves broke them down into poses,
was a wonderful vibgyor of nature when we were in water,
sunny at times,raining at times,enjoying that stuff even without having our platter,
we just loved this place n experience and dint even know the time,
superb!lovely,what more do u expect to describe about it in a rhyme!
When at last the kovalam visit came to an end,
we moved on to allepy,backwaters was where our time was to spend,
the nature's beauty at this site was watched traversing in a boat,
i wonder that the flow of thoughts would be better,if there i wrote,
this was where our friends started getting a little ill,
the bheemar batch is what abhi n i called them at our will,
i just felt here that the tour from now would just get dry,
for some other reasons too i felt i would cry!
Now was the time for the another most awaited place,
athirpally water falls is about what im gonna fill all this space,
do u remember ash dancing to the tunes "barso re",
that was where we were to spare some part of the day,
was amazing,fantastic,awesome,beautiful n mind blowing,
to watch the huge gush of water descending n flowing,
had to go deep down into the forest,
to just get amazed to look at the water's thrust!
Walking down through the wet forest soil,we could have easily slipped,
but not the case,when guys had their hands around to get the gals hips gripped,
heavy sprinkles of water,though far off,slashed out on our face,
now we understood why the place had that much craze,
it was now time to see the worst,
when many healths deteriation just outburst,
they had to lay down on the hospital beds,
the healthy had to just serve them as the number just spread...!
This brought on a long delay,we dint expect this stunner,
although we just moved on at late night to munnar,
the next morning again,everything got set right,
thank god,no one were that serious to return back in flight,
beautiful flowers,lovely sceneries n too good roads,
all hill stations are almost alike,but their undescribable beauty speaks loads,
this was the place known for its spices,
the purchasing list went on,none worrying about their prices!
It was also beautiful watching the tea estates on an incline,
looking at it how could our fantasy for fotos ever decline,
our final journey through bus down through the ghats,
just brought the feel of the tour ending within our hearts,
however this dint mean,we would sit idle thinking about that,
but came the time for one of our tour's best jutt,
tunes of naaku mukka n bhutto raised the spirits of everyone here,
believe me the bus was transformed into a disco tek i sware!
At cochin one last night halt,one last dinner all together,
the next morning breakfast along with the birds of same feather,
time had come for the tour to end,
how could we ever forget this memorable enjoying trend,
thanks to all for the extended co-operation,
but dont ever forget the mentors roles in success of this operation,
all through our life none of us can forget the joy n our good times,
let this happiness n satisfaction remain as long as water still sublimes!
written by:
@k!L
Dedicated to: VAIBHAV,Santosh,Dilip,Abhinav,Shankar,Rahul,Srikar,Akshit,
Kv,Sandy,Sreenivas,Prasanna,Badri,Teja n all other gals who were on tour.....
9 comments:
enduku rasnav mama poem tour gurinchi cha chadvinappudalla gurtostadi
It's like you've described the entire tour with all your deep sense of poetry!!...dude seriously..n truely..ur awesome!!
marvell!!! dude
describing every inch of memorable frames of "our life"
hmmmmmm.........before i used feel a little for not coming to tour but your description made me to feel more sad u are really awesome dude ;) emmana poetryaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ekkadiko tesukupoyav imagiantiontho.....................
abba! nai malum tha baap me ek bahut bade poet k saath tha itne saare din
k for all those who r just weak in hindi
phew! i dint know that all these days i was with such a great guy with such art...
wah!!u brougth back memories again wid this 'piece' of poetry...it just didnt leave anything unsaid...all in all the tour was such fun..kovalam was such fun...n i'll never forget the view of the falls in the dead of the nite on the way to munnar...
it was really awesome dear,really it was a very beautiful trip with all fun and joy.Every moment is memorable and unforgetable dear.Even many of us became good friends in those few days dude.your poetry is really amazing.
good one ra,already read it before but feels exciting even if read again.
Just left with one question after reading ur poetry 3 years later---"Whr have all those days gone????" reminds me of all the mischief we'd done as & when u explained abt each place...esp. tapping feet to the tunes of bhutto & nakka mukka as u said...adaithe ekdam highlight!!! to this day i remember all the ppl jumping in the bus :D :D Gr8 old memories :) :) Ofcourse excellently written(as usual)!!! If I don't compliment, I feel my comment makes no sense ;) ;)
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